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i cried myself to sleep last night
i hope that makes you happy
knowing that you injected
such pain into my veins

and i hate knowing that you
are aware of how i felt about you
i hate the fact that i let you
touch me

like no other boy has before

i hate knowing that
i laid my hands on you
in such ways that shame me

i hate you and your wandering hands,
your celestial fallacies,
your soft lips,
and your wretched fabrications

please don't feed me anymore
of your delicious lies
cause they're giving me a heartache
this is kind of a string of poems---a series of events and feelings, i guess.

1. "friction"
2. "Accidentally in Love"
3. "Liar, Liar"


..isn't is funny how feelings can go from such a high to such an utter low with just a few words?
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sejin-chime Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2010
hmm....i've had this feeling for three years....stupid me....but it's with a girl...and she will say, "oh, you are so beautiful" i guess i can believe that, but when she kisses me and whispers, "i love you" well, i knew she was lying the entire time...she is just using me and i let her...because i love her...oh so, so much....so yeah, i hate it wen i let her kiss me, touch me, lie to me. and i hate that she can lie to me so easily. sometimes i wonder why people do these things. why do they love to hurt us?
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number0005762 Featured By Owner May 1, 2007
that is awesome. . . its very good.
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ItsNothingPersonal Featured By Owner May 1, 2007   Writer
thank you very much. :)
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pinkshadow Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2005   Writer
I know that feeling so well, and i suspect that maybe a lot of girls do? I dont know though, i feel like i've played some pretty unique games with my life, but it seems to me you'd understand them and perhaps play them yourself?

I dont think i like him, whoever he is, but i think that is because he reminds me of a him of my own. A him i try my damndest every morning to hate, and fall asleep thinking fondly about every night, in spite of myself.

Anyway, I really like this poem, i think i'm gonna :+fav: it, 'cause it makes me think. You write some beautiful stuff.
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ItsNothingPersonal Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2005   Writer
I would assume that a lot of girls can relate to this--relate to what I am feeling right now. And this boy (he is but a mere boy is me now) is one that I thought was utterly wonderful and sincere in all of his actions. Oh, how I was wrong. My series of poems about him tell how I was wrong--I eagerly believed his apologize, and my heart returned to beating for him. Mistake there.


Long story, actually, but I think my poems do a good enough job of explaining.


And thank you for your many compliments--you've no idea how much they mean to me. :)
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pinkshadow Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2005   Writer
the comments are no problem. I'm usually not a poetry fan, but yours interest me
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ItsNothingPersonal Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2005   Writer
i think that's one of the best compliments ever. glad my poetry interests you.
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saveadance4me Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2005
i love this so much.








almost as much as i hate him.
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ItsNothingPersonal Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2005   Writer
i think i hate him even more than i love this...
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kaitecometrue Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2005   Writer
i love it!
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